The answer is 24,000 words in the last two months. That’s what I’ve trimmed from the current manuscript. It reads just a wee bit faster these days.

Can’t quite wrap your brain around that number?  Look below the fold. Now multiply that festering pile of nonsense by a factor of 8. You can see why editing is as important as writing. The words I’ve removed/changed were as harmful to the story as if I’d just put the stuff below the fold into the book directly.

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